Final Film Opening

Poster Inspirations

These 2 horror movies (Uninvited and Mama) were both popular but also very well made films that are seen as great templates for sinister horrors.


This poster is similar to ours as the character in the poster is unidentified. This leaves mysterious and creepy enigma that we want as it will attract the audience. I also like how the colours are black and white because it gives a scary feel to the film and we also had this with our film poster.


This film poster is also another inspiration because it has an unidentified figure as the main feature. In our poster we wanted an unidentified character as it leaves a lot of questions and this is a common convention for horror.

BFI Trip

This is a picture of all of the media student on our media trip to the BFI building.



On this trip we learned all about mainstream films and the difference between different production companies and high budget and low budget films. Mainstream film institutions would involve 'The Big 6' which would be the following companies:

- 20th Century Fox
- Warner Bros
- Universal
- Paramount
- MGM
- Disney
- Universal

Titles list for 'Gone'

The following list are all of the titles in order that feature in our opening sequence:


  • A Production by Silver Lining - 2 seconds
  • A Production by White Box Studios - 3 seconds
  • A White Box Film - 3 seconds
  • James Brookes - 4 seconds
  • Connor Snell - 2 seconds
  • Tom Wise - 3 seconds
  • Casting by Tom Wise - 4 seconds
  • Co producer Tom Wise - 2 seconds
  • Music by Marco Beltrami - 5 seconds
  • Gone - 2 seconds
  • Edited by Tom Wise - 6 seconds
  • Production designer Tom Wise - 2 seconds
  • Director of Photography Jack Beeson - 2 seconds
  • Executive Producers White Box - 2 seconds
  • Produced by Big Talk Pictures - 2 seconds
  • Screenplay by Jack Beeson - 2 seconds

Shot List

Today in class, we came up with a list of shots that we are planning to take for our opening sequence 'Gone'. We tried to vary the shots including, panning shots, move shots and long shots. We know that these shots will change over the course of making our film 'Gone' because we will find ways of improving our film.


Inspiration - Insidious

Whilst we were thinking of our opening and the shots and titles that we were going to use, we decided to look at a similar opening sequence that was already popular. We looked at Insidious as this would be a good opening sequence to follow as it is everything that defines a horror film. We looked at the titles and different shots and also timings which were quite unexpectedly important. My favourite genre of film to watch is horror and Insidious is one of my favourites so this opening sequence was already sort of an inspiration. I enjoy being scared and this is what I tried to include into our film 'Gone'.


Music Research

We needed to look at some music for our film 'Gone' because all of the good horror films include creepy music that builds up tension and draws the audience in.


The first music we looked at was 'Tea for Three Plus One' by Marco Beltrami. We did this because the film 'The Woman in Black' was a very popular and well made horror movie and we thought that this type of music would definitely attract the audience.



This was another music track which we looked at. We really did like it but we came to the conclusion that this track was to linked in with Insidious. 

Audience Research for 'Gone'

Audience Research

Who are you targeting?

At the start of the film we were targeting the age range of 15-40. This is because our film is a horror and contains a substantial amount of gore and horror. The certificate for our film is a 15. We want as many people to like our film as possible so we have included the basic conventions of a horror film so that they know what they can expect.

Who is most likely to see our film?

I think that our film will most likely attract the age group of 15-25. People that love horror films such as Sinister, Evil dead and Insidious will also love our film as they are quite similar. A lot of young people will want to come and see this film as they are the biggest age group that watch horror movies.

Who is your primary audience?

Primary audience - People who enjoy horror films.
Secondary audience - People who enjoy films that have an adrenaline.

Fonts for 'Gone' Research

Font Research
Today we decided to research which font to use for pour titles in our opening sequence 'Gone'. The font type that we found most suitable was the 28 days later creepy font because this fits in with our genre of horror as the letters seem deranged. As we edit we will have to make sure that the font still seems suitable because we did receive comments saying that it might seem a bit too cliche.


Characters and Roles

Myself - I took the role of being the young boys friend who he was playing football in the park with. I was the character who kicked the ball in one of the first shots and was looking around for the young boy in the park. I was also the character who was running down the pathway and I was doing this because I was in shock of something that I saw.
At the start of this whole process, it was me who came up with the story and I wrote it out.
I filmed a lot and put a lot of work into each step of the film.

James - My brother James was the role of the young boy who went missing and mysteriously and in a sinister style walked around the place randomly. We did this to create a scary and creepy feel.

Jack - Jack mainly had the role of filming and directing. Jack had to make some really good shots which we pulled off which put him in uncomfortable positions and conditions.

Tom - Tom mainly had the role of editing. We changed a lot of shots and music which we wanted in our opening so Tom had a lot to edit i not a lot of time.

Synopsis Planning

Our film involves a young boy who goes missing in a park.

Location-
Our first location was at Shennans Park which is a park opposite of my house. We filmed a lot there, however it was very dark.
Another place which we filmed was in school: We filmed against the walls, on the field, down the corridor and on the playground.

Props-
Our first prop which we thought would be useful in our film was a football. This gave the audience a sign of innocence of the young boy because he was playing around with his friend with a football in a park.
Another main prop which we used in our film 'Gone' was the 'Missing Boy' article. This was very important as it showed the audience a little bit of what the film was going to be about.
We also smeared mud on my brothers face who played the character of the little boy.

Institution

Film4
Film4 is the institution that we will be using for our film 'Gone' and is a production company which is British based that is widely known internationally. It is responsible for backing a large number of famous films and this is one of the reasons in why we chose it. 


This is the Film4 production logo in which we will be featuring in our opening 'Gone'.

Film Certificate

Film Certificate - 15


We needed to find an appropriate certificate age for our film 'Gone' as it will include a lot of gruesome and sinister horror. Taking this into consideration and also the audience which we are aiming for which is 15-35 we decided that the most appropriate and suitable certificate would be a 15.



Sound and Reporter choices in our film 'Gone'

Missing Boy Report Voiceover

This was the news article/report which we used in our film 'Gone'. It linked in to our film extremely well and it gave the film a sinister effect to the audience. It also allowed the audience to receive an easier understanding of the film. It was extremely specific when we had to cut the voiceover and it was vital in making it right in order for it to flow correctly.

'Gone' Poster

These are the posters that we made and edited on Photoshop for our advertisement.





Feedback from First Draft

These are the feedback sheets which we were given because other classes watched our first draft of our film and gave it a mark out of 60. Overall we were happy because it was only our first draft, we still had much more to do and we got reasonably good marks anyway. People said if the genre could be easily identified and also what was good and what was bad.




This was one of our best marks for our first film draft - 50.  We were very happy with this feedback as they said that our film was easy to identify the genre. They complimented the whole opening and said that music and the radio voiceover was 'really' good. They also commented saying that it draws people in, meaning a lot of enigma was there. The only thing they said that was critical was that the flashing face was random but we took that as a pinch of salt as no one also correlated with this.


This was also another high score for our first film draft - 49. They said that they liked most of the shots and the music was positively dramatic, however couldn't identify the specific genre as they thought our opening was mystery. They also criticised where our titles were placed but this didn't put us down as we hadn't finished improving our titles so this was just a little push to show us that we did need to change them. 







This was one of our lowest scores for our first film draft - 36. They could easily identify our genre which was a good thing but they said that a lot of our shots were too dark and we did agree with this so a step that we took after we received our feedback was to make the shots brighter or to retake the shots which were not easily visible. They did say a lot of good things on the other hand by saying that the film did present an adequate enigma and that the enjoyed our effects and text.




'Gone' PowerPoint

'Missing Boy' Article

'Missing Boy' Article

This is our article which we made which is key for our opening sequence. This is because at the start of the video we see different parts of the article, starting with the image, then the title which says 'Missing Boy' in capitals which gives some help to the audience about whats going on and then it leads on to the text.


Second draft for 'Gone'

Shooting Risk Assessment


This is the risk assessment which we had to follow when we were filming 'Gone'. We had to rate the risk level out of 10 and had to put in control measures to make sure it was safe to film in the area and conditions.

Shooting Schedule


This is our shooting schedule for our film 'Gone'. We did stick to it but the final shooting day had to be arranged because some of the shots that we took were too dark and we had to include different shots.

First draft for 'Gone'

Gone Storyboard

This is our storyboard for our film ‘Gone’. We have 15 shots in total and this is the first one. The first shot will be in a creepy misty park. There will be a boy on his own who will be walking through the park with his back to the camera. It will be a long shot. The title will form from the mist which will say who the film was ‘Directed by’. This shot will last for 17 seconds. The second shot will be a close up of the side view of the little boys face as he’s walking. This shot will last for 3 seconds. The third shot will still be the boy walking but a shot from the side. It will most likely be a tracking shot and the title will also come from the mist and it will say who the film is ‘Written by’.  This shot will last for 3 seconds and is a tracking shot. The fourth shot will be another close up of the little boys face but straight on as he’s walking. This shot will last for 3 seconds and is a close up. The fifth shot will then go back to what the first shot was like, with the boy’s back to the camera and the title will come out of the mist saying ‘Produced by’. This shot will last for 5 seconds.. The sixth shot will be a flashback to 3 boys playing football. Each character will have a title above their heads which will show their actor name. They will make a couple of passes between each other and then the shot will move on. This shot will last for 5 seconds and is a 180 degree shot. The seventh shot will be of the little boy kicking the ball football and then you see him apologise to his friends and you can guess that he kicked the ball too far. This shot will last for 5 seconds and is a close up. There will be a title saying ‘Director of photography’. The eighth shot will be of the ball going down the hill and there will be a title saying ‘Production designer’. This shot will last for 5 seconds and is a side shot. The ninth shot will be of the boy running down the hill after the ball and there will be a title saying ‘Edited by’. This shot will last for 5 seconds and is a tracking shot. The tenth shot will be of the boy at the bottom of the hill, looking around for the ball. He cannot see it and he turns around and runs and you can see that he’s scared. There will be a title which will say ‘Cast. This shot will last for 20 seconds and is a close up to tracking. The eleventh shot will be over the shoulders of the other two boys and you see them start to walk towards the hill. There will be a title saying ‘Casting by’. This shot last for 4 seconds and is a long shot. The twelfth shot will be of the boys walking towards the camera going down the hill. This shot will last for 6 seconds and is a side shot. There will be a title saying ‘Costume designer’. The thirteenth shot will be of the 2 boys looking around for the little boy. They do not find him. You then see a shock on their faces. This shot will last for 10 seconds and is a side shot. There will be a title saying ‘Music by’. The fourteenth shot will be of the 2 boys running down the pathway. During this shot, there will be music and tension building up and then there will be a sudden stop. This shot will last for 15 seconds and is a close up. The fifteenth shot will go back to the first shot of the boy walking through the park. There will be a title saying ‘Gone’ in the fog and then the boy will fade into nothing. This shot will last for 10 seconds and is a side shot.

Representation

Representation
Representation is the way that people and places are presented to the audience. To make it simpler, the media takes something that is already there and re-presents it to us in the way that they choose.
Stereotypes: These are used so that the audience can instantly understand what is trying to be shown.
Archetypes: This is the ultimate stereotype. For example, a frenchman with a baquette and wine.
Countertypes: A representation that challenges tradition stereotypical associations of groups, people or places.


The two characters above are both French. However, the top character is very stereotypical of someone from France, whereas the below character it would be harder to understand.

Production Diary




Production Diary

11/11/2014 - Today we got ready our film ideas so they were ready to present for Thursdays lesson to the rest of the group. We all created PowerPoint's as this was the most suitable format. On our presentations we collected different inspirations and ideas and talked about what we would include in our opening scene.


13/11/2014 - Today we pitched our different film ideas to each other to decide what film idea we were going to go with. Jack pitched a drama film to do with a man being convicted of a murder and the film was to ponder on if he committed the murder or not. Tom's idea was a teen drama evolved around drugs and crime which he gained his influences from Noel Clarke's Kidulthood and Adulthood. Then the final idea came from Connor which was a horror which based around a couple who are not able to have children. From this the couple went to take other children to be theirs. We agreed finally that Connor's idea was the best and we decided to go for that for our concept.

14/11/2014 - Today not in our groups we started to do our Title Tasks. This involved watching many different clips and reviewing them. This included a history of film openings and a interview with a man who is very big in the film industry. Our final task was to take screenshots from three film openings and annotate them for every title that appeared such as actors and production companies.

17/11/2014 - Today we adapted the film concept and slightly changed the main story of the film. We took the concept away from the couple who were not able to have children and changed it too a boy who went missing on a winter evening in a park. We then went on too reviewing different film openings as a group to gain inspiration from a number of different films. (In the Picture we reviewed the opening of Casino Royale)




18/11/2014 - Today Connor was creating our marketing ideas to promote our film in a PowerPoint presentation which you can see him doing below. In the presentation he included how he would advertise our film and what he would do to promote it in the best way. Meanwhile Tom looking at our target audience which he was doing by reviewing films in our category and our style of film and comparing them with what audience the films were most popular with.

Audience Reserch

Target Audience


The target audience for our film is going to be aged between 15-40, the ceritifcate of the film is going to be from 15-40. From looking at previous horror films which have a similar sense to ours, I gathered some information from films this year which have appealed to the similar target audience which we are trying to gather. I started looking at a website which showed the 25 top Netflix horror's which are frequently shown. As netflix has become a much larger network this year for younger a younger audince of around 17-18 this would fit perfectly for some key statistics which may help our film.

5. The Cabin In The Woods

Year: 2011
Director: Drew Goddard
For a movie chock-full of twists, perhaps the biggest is that despite all appearances to the contrary, The Cabin in the Woods is a heartfelt love story. Mind you, not between any of the young and pretty college students who tempt fate at the cabin in question. No, this romance is between creators Joss Whedon and Drew Goddard, and the scary-movie genre as a whole. A ménage à terror, if you will. Like Scream before it, the film is a simultaneous dissection and celebration of all the tropes to which it pays homage, while also managing to be a superb example of the genre in its own right. The script is vintage Whedon—smart, funny and surprising. Thanks to Goddard’s direction and staging, and despite the film’s very focus on the formulaic nature of horror, it still manages to be tense, atmospheric and jump-out-of-your-seat scary. The Cabin in the Woods may very well be the ultimate schlocky little horror movie.—Dan Kaufman



4. Nosferatu


Year: 1929
Director: F. W. Marnau
F.W. Murnau’s sublimely peculiar riff on Dracula has been a fixture of the genre for so long that to justify its place on this list seems like a waste of time. Magnificent in its freakish, dour mood and visual eccentricities, the movie invented much of modern vampire lore as we know it. It’s once-a-year required viewing of the most rewarding kind.—Sean Gandert


3.Let the right one in




Year: 2008
Director: Tomas Alfredson
Vampire stories are plastered all over American pop culture these days (True Blood, Twilight, The Vampire Diaries), but leave it to the Swedes to produce a vampire film that manages to be both sweet and frightening. The friendship between Oskar, a scrawny, 12-year-old outcast, and Eli, a centuries-old vampire frozen in the body of a child, is a chilling but beautiful story to behold.—Jeremy Medina
 




2. The Silence of the Lambs


Year: 1991
Director: Jonathan Demme
In the face of grotesque sequels, lesser prequels and numerous parodies, The Silence of the Lambs still stands as a cinematic work of art among crime dramas. Winning the five gold rings of Oscar-dom (best picture, best director, best actor, best actress, best screenplay) Anthony Hopkins’ portrayal of the murderous Hannibal Lecter proves the worth of surrounding one of cinema’s greatest thespians with a stellar supporting team. Director Jonathan Demme deftly wields the brush of that talent to bring audiences into the dark, sadistic world of Dr. Lecter while leaving them gasping at the twists and turns of novelist Thomas Harris’ gruesomely wonderful story. As what happens with all great films, second and third viewings fail to diminish the ride.—Tim Basham


1. Rosemary’s Baby


Year: 1968
Director: Roman Polanski
The most famous of Polanski’s paranoid thrillers, not to mention the most inviolable. The film infiltrates a privileged space of middle-class entitlement and pollutes it with the most extreme evil possible: sweet, unassuming Rosemary (Mia Farrow) is pregnant, but could her baby already belong to someone else? The volatile climax has an answer, and the sequence has remained one of the most celebrated in horror history for good reason.—Sean Edgar



As you can see the films which scored the highest is a rather old film, and this is the most viewed film of 2014 on Netflix, obviously our target audience typically prefer a much newer horror film compared to an old one produced in the 1960s. Statistics show that 17 year olds specifically prefer jump scares rather than scares which are less startling.

Prelim Self Evaluation

Self Evaluation

Who did you work with and how did you manage the task between you?
I worked with Archie Edmonds and Tom Wise. We went with my idea and storyline of 'Broken Brothers' and we worked extremely well together and I think this was because we were all really confident with the film idea. Before we filmed we outlined each scene, each shot and the script and this made us very organised so we could quickly get on to the filming. Me and Archie took the roles of the two brothers whilst Tom filmed us. After we had all of the shots that we all needed, we individually edited our own opening.  
How did you plan your sequence? What process did you use? What theories did you try to take into account?
To plan our sequence we had to create a specific storyboard which included the different shots which we needed in order to make it look good. We did this in chronological order so we didn't get confused and we annotated it to make sure we knew exactly what we were doing.

Prelim Task

Juno Practise Task

This was our first filming task and we had to try and copy and recreate our own version of the Juno 'All I want is you' video.

This is what we had to match:




This was our best effort:


Juno Storyboard


This was the storyboard that we followed whilst filming for the Juno task. It was quite hard to film as some of the shots were difficult to take and timing was also an issue.

Title Sequences Task

Title sequences task

History of title design: The first video in which I watched was a Brief History of Title Design. This video consisted of a lot of famous film titles which were intelligently crafted such as one of my childhoods favourite 'The Pink Panther'. The video definitely inspired me to think of clever titles in which I can use in my production because the video gave us an overview of how special effects and animation have changed over the years of producing film titles and now I can see the amazing thing in which I can do with my film.















Richard Morrison's Interview: One of the first things that Richard Morrison talks about is not over complicating an idea to start with. Our group should keep this in mind as we do not want to over complicate the storyline of the film because it could come across as confusing to the audience. We also want to leave lots of enigma so the film comes across as interesting and mysterious.
He goes onto talking about having a basic storyline for a film and over time you should work on it, collectively taking bits away and adding bits on. I think this is a perfect lead in example, because it means that we can adapt and evolve what happens in the story and we can keep making it better and better.
Finally, near the end of the video, Richard Morrison talks about communicating the vision and getting the ideas together for the film. This is vital for our group because we need to make sure that what is happening in the opening sequence is clear and isn't interpreted in the wrong way. Also, we need to work together as a team by communicating our ideas to each other and giving feedback to each others work.

Marking Student Film Openings



I would rate this film 56 out of 60.

The genre was clear to being a thriller/sci-fi and the conventions which were used were used well to show this genre. The music linked in extremely well with the video and stayed the same the whole way through until the end when it stopped and then the girl vanished and it slowed down and loud bangs were made when she reappeared and the film name came on the screen. I liked the use of special effects and future theme. A lot of good shots were made and it was exciting as it was a chase scene.

However, I think that the titles could have been used better in linking in with the genre. The titles were quite plain and boring. Also, the target audience was unclear as there was violence but usually sic-fi films are ranged to target all sorts of audiences.

Overall, it was a good opening sequence in which left a lot of enigma.





Marking Student Film Openings



I would rate this film 30 out of 60.

The music did fit in to what was going on, however the genre was very unclear. Also, the film came across as really boring and slow. The titles were also plain and simple and were not linked in with the film very intelligently. They were just white in a plain font in the corner of the screen.

Marking Student Film Openings


Other Student Film Openings

In today's lesson we watched some video openings from previous years and in other schools and we marked them and said what we liked about them and what we didn't like about them.

We went through the mark scheme.
Level 1 0-23 marks
Level 2 24-35 marks
Level 3 36-47 marks
Level 4 48-60 marks

Here are a couple of the videos:



This was the best video that we watched by far. The Edge showed to be an Action. Titles looked professional which meant they were used effectively in the video. All of the shots that were needed could be seen in the video and conventions in the video meant that the genre could be identified easily. Music was appropriate and fitted in with what was going on. The fast going pace and mysterious characters left a lot of questioning.

I gave this video a mark of 57 out of 60.




This was one of the videos which wasn't so good because it seemed to be boring. Roses Are Red showed to be a teen girl film. Also, the music was a bit corny and gradually got annoying as time went on. The scene of getting up and doing tasks such as make-up and getting dressed is common in film beginnings so there was nothing really that I hadn't seen before. Nothing exciting happened in the video but the titles used were put together with thought and came across cleverly. All of the shots were also quite well planned out and put together effectively.

I gave this video a mark of 36 out of 60.




Level 1 0–23 marks The work for the main task is possibly incomplete. There is minimal evidence in the work of the creative use of any relevant technical skills such as:
• Producing material appropriate for the target audience and task;
• using titles appropriately according to institutional conventions;
• using sound with images and editing appropriately for the task set;
• shooting material appropriate to the task set; including controlled use of the camera, attention to framing, variety of shot distance and close attention to mise-en-scene;
• using editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer and making selective and appropriate use of shot transitions and other effects.

Level 2 24–35 marks There is evidence of a basic level of ability in the creative use of some of the following technical skills:
• Producing material appropriate for the target audience and task;
• using titles appropriately according to institutional conventions;
• using sound with images and editing appropriately for the task set;
• shooting material appropriate to the task set;, including controlled use of the camera, attention to framing, variety of shot distance and close attention to mise-en-scene;
• using editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer and making selective and appropriate use of shot transitions and other effects.

Level 3 36–47 marks There is evidence of proficiency in the creative use of many of the following technical skills:
• Producing material appropriate for the target audience and task;
• using titles appropriately according to institutional conventions;
• using sound with images and editing appropriately for the task set;
• shooting material appropriate to the task set; including controlled use of the camera, attention to framing, variety of shot distance and close attention to mise-en-scene;
• using editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer and making selective and appropriate use of shot transitions and other effects.

Level 4 48–60 marksThere is evidence of excellence in the creative use of most of the following technical skills:
• material appropriate for the target audience and task;
• using titles appropriately according to institutional conventions;
• using sound with images and editing appropriately for the task set;
• shooting material appropriate to the task set;including controlled use of the camera, attention to framing, variety of shot distance and close attention to mise-en-scene;
• using editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer and making selective and appropriate use of shot transitions and other effects.














Low Budget Film vs. High Budget Film


Premier Practise

My Premier Practice


This was my first time using Premier so I had no idea how to use the software but gradually as I learned new techniques and skills I discovered that I could do a lot of things with editing video. We were told in this task to mix film and sound to come up with a video of dancing animals and the city with a variety of music.I think that the music went well with the video but to make it even better next time I should put transitions in between the blackouts to make it more professional. I learned how to use Premier and how to edit video and sound which I can use in the future.

Narrative

Narrative

Vladimir Propp - Characters

  • always a hero
  • helper
  • villain
  • princess
Levi - Strauss - Binary oppositions

  • 'good vs evil'
  • 'black vs white'
  • 'rich vs poor'
  • 'country vs city'
  • 'girl vs boy'
Todorov:

  1. Start at an equilibrium
  2. obstacles put in place that have to be overcome
  3. End at a different equilibrium
Roland Barthes:

  • Symbols
  • action
  • enigma (mystery)




Enigma of the trailer of 'The Prestige'

  • Who is the old man?
  • Who was the random man in the audience?
  • Who was the little girl?
  • Why did the magic trick on the stage not work?
  • What happens next after the man is trapped under water?

Denotations and Connotations



This is the poster for the third series of Geordie Shore which is set in Cancun as you can see in the red border. It is a modern programme in which a set of 9 lads and lasses from Newcastle are put in a house which results in arguments, drama and a lot of drunk and sexual behaviour.

Denotations: A group of young people standing on a beach in a hot country.

Connotations: We can see that each character standing on the beach is individual as they are all wearing different clothes and standing in different postures and positions. In contrast we can see that they are a close group of friends as they all stand close together with some characters leaning and putting their arms on or around other characters. In the middle of the picture we can see one of the lads sitting in a wheelchair with a cast around his leg which shows us that while the group of friends are in Cancun, this particular character has injured his leg through immature behaviour. We can see this as he seems to be wearing tight blue jeans and a red cape, a sort of superhero costume. This would deem to be immature so we can see that the injury on his leg has been self inflicted. We therefore presume that the rest of the group are also immature and this is further backed up when we can see the lass on the far left is holding a pinhata.

Semiotics

Semiotics:
- the study of signs
- also of anything which stands for 'something else'

Denotation - what we see when we look at an image (what it is)
Connotation - what we understand from this image (what other meanings it has)

Film language: Opening Scene Task

Film Language: Opening scene task

Film language helps us understand characters and why the film is being shown a certain way.

There are four different parts to it:

  • Camera
  • Sound
  • Editing
  • Mise En Scene
Camera - FAM:

  • Frame
  • Angle
  • Movement
Sound - MCDOVED:

  • Music
  • Contrapuntal - contrast
  • Diegetic (what actors can hear)
  • Offscreen/Onscreen
  • Voiceover
  • Emotion
  • Dialogue
Editing - TOP:

  • Transition
  • Order of Narrative
  • Pace
Mise En Scene - CLAMPS:

  • Costume
  • Lighting
  • Actors
  • Makeup
  • Props
  • Setting
Up:


Camera - There is a long shot when the couple are walking up the steep hill and then when they are on the hill, they look up to the sky at the clouds and the scene uses birds eye view to look at the couple lying down looking up and then it uses worms eye view when they look at the clouds.

Sound - The music has the same tune the whole way through the scene, however changes speed and pitch depending what is happening in their lives. There is hardly any diegetic sound - we never hear the couple speak. However there are some sound such as the camera taking a picture right at the start, the thunderstorm and the jar smashing - the actors can hear key points in the scene.

Editing - The scene covers 50 years of a couples life in just 3 minutes. It shows time passing when the wife is doing up her husbands ties and the jar money keep smashing.

Love Beats All - an outline for a film with the genre Rom-Com



This is the Rom-Com film outline that we presented to the class and after receiving some high scores, we were very pleased with what we had come up with. The pun intended title that I came up with was given generally a lot of credit for and this, as well as the unique mix of characters featured, pushed our scores highly to make them fantastic. We also received some criticism with our presentation however, as people had picked out that we hadn't written too much about how we were going to market and advertise our movie. I feel that if we were to include more information and ideas about marketing that we would have recieved near-to-perfect marks.