These are the feedback sheets which we were given because other classes watched our first draft of our film and gave it a mark out of 60. Overall we were happy because it was only our first draft, we still had much more to do and we got reasonably good marks anyway. People said if the genre could be easily identified and also what was good and what was bad.
This was one of our best marks for our first film draft - 50. We were very happy with this feedback as they said that our film was easy to identify the genre. They complimented the whole opening and said that music and the radio voiceover was 'really' good. They also commented saying that it draws people in, meaning a lot of enigma was there. The only thing they said that was critical was that the flashing face was random but we took that as a pinch of salt as no one also correlated with this.
This was also another high score for our first film draft - 49. They said that they liked most of the shots and the music was positively dramatic, however couldn't identify the specific genre as they thought our opening was mystery. They also criticised where our titles were placed but this didn't put us down as we hadn't finished improving our titles so this was just a little push to show us that we did need to change them.
This was one of our lowest scores for our first film draft - 36. They could easily identify our genre which was a good thing but they said that a lot of our shots were too dark and we did agree with this so a step that we took after we received our feedback was to make the shots brighter or to retake the shots which were not easily visible. They did say a lot of good things on the other hand by saying that the film did present an adequate enigma and that the enjoyed our effects and text.